Kyothine's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tom Fulp: Ace Attorney]

It's okay.

I loved the phoenix wright similarities (like the similar poses), but the whole thing seemed too undramatic. The theme was boring and there was no *ding* or *boom* noises like in the actual PW games. One thing I liked was the objections. Wade's was all slow and Tom's sounded like he was eating something, lol.

Little-Rena responds:

I did miss a few effects out yes, couldn't find them.

[Pokemanze]

Stupid

Although I commend you for the well done graphics, the whole plot was very dry. The writing was poor and the jokes were stupid and ill-timed. The voice acting was also grating on my ears. If you're going to make a high-pitched voice, make a voice actress do it, not some guy talking in a falsetto.

Stalagmite responds:

thank you for your positive comment on the graphics. i agree the plot and writing was lacking... i have no experience in writing and this is my first official submission. so i think i deserve a break lol.
I think in all fairness JOKES are what you make them.. everyone else thought it was funny, so i guess the target audience i am aiming at it satisfied. the voice acting... it is also one of my first performances for the public. i have no voice training or anything. and think my range is quite acceptable given my lack of experience and training. you could get a woman to do it. but why does it matter? is it meant to be taken that seriously.... my hobby?
I think you are either offended by this flash... or by something i have said in one of my reviews. I am sorry if i have offended you... i have apologised GENUINELY if that is the case. but can i review your review? and just say... you dont have to put it so tactlessly. you can upset a lot of people by being so blunt and clumsy.
work on the execution of your reviews. and dont come down like a ton of shit bricks on something they spent time and effort to create.
thank you for your review. i will take the limited helpful information from it, and work on it.

[LittleWing]

Sweet

It was very well done- It wasn't too flash color lazy animation, but it wasn't too boring. I also really like how you improved the fbf line-transform animation by adding shading.

[Pixtropolis City]

Nah

This was so bad. The different parts didn't even go together. The whole thing was basically a copped up jacket made of patches and rags. It was ALL motion tweening, and the graphics were sooo bad. If you want to make a pixel animation, at least do it correctly and not make it an eyesore.

The only thing special about this collab was the pixeltools addon you used, which isn't that special to begin with. Lame.

[Sonic Shorts: Volume 5]

Stupid.

The graphics were fairly decent, but only the first one and the "You got...!" shorts were even chuckle-able. The humor needs much improvemt - most of the shorts dragged out jokes for too long for them to be funny.

[Super Mario Hyadain]

SO Cheesey SO stupid and SO poorly animated.

The graphics were fairly poor, and the concept wasn't good at all. It was just some cosplayers singing in Japanese. In fact, I'm pretty sure the Japanese would be offended that you gave this flash the label "Japanese." This is FAR from Japanese. This is called Wapanese.

[Dt.Narubleachballimon-oh]

Incredibly shoddy voice acting.

"Im a fightier fighty fight than you! derp derp!"

The voices were so strained and horrible. I can see you tried to pull off some exaggerations, like "What! That's Impossible!" but they didn't work out. The graphics were also pretty bad.

[LEFT4LOL]

Poor.

The animation and graphics were horrible. It was so shoddy, I expected to see something like this in 2005. Although Left 4 Speed honestly didn't have fantastic animation, the line-y patchycolor style of animation here was a real eye strain. The humor wasn't special either. The only time I laughed at all was the Friendly Fire part, and even that part was way over exaggerated.

In summation, please improve the graphics. They were a HUGE distraction from the plot.

[Bedtime.]

Meh.

Nothing special. It wasn't touching at all, and the whole "jiggling lines" style was irritating to watch. There was also no point to the whole movie. I understand that this started as a doodle, but please make it have more substance next time.

[-Love at First Sight-]

It's pretty good.

For a music collab, this was pretty good. I liked the animation, but one thing that can be improved is the storyline. It's as if there's a new story every 10 seconds. Overall, I still liked this though.

Zwickel responds:

The storyline is KISS