Kyothine's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tom Fulp: Ace Attorney]

It's okay.

I loved the phoenix wright similarities (like the similar poses), but the whole thing seemed too undramatic. The theme was boring and there was no *ding* or *boom* noises like in the actual PW games. One thing I liked was the objections. Wade's was all slow and Tom's sounded like he was eating something, lol.

Little-Rena responds:

I did miss a few effects out yes, couldn't find them.

[Pokemanze]

Stupid

Although I commend you for the well done graphics, the whole plot was very dry. The writing was poor and the jokes were stupid and ill-timed. The voice acting was also grating on my ears. If you're going to make a high-pitched voice, make a voice actress do it, not some guy talking in a falsetto.

Stalagmite responds:

thank you for your positive comment on the graphics. i agree the plot and writing was lacking... i have no experience in writing and this is my first official submission. so i think i deserve a break lol.
I think in all fairness JOKES are what you make them.. everyone else thought it was funny, so i guess the target audience i am aiming at it satisfied. the voice acting... it is also one of my first performances for the public. i have no voice training or anything. and think my range is quite acceptable given my lack of experience and training. you could get a woman to do it. but why does it matter? is it meant to be taken that seriously.... my hobby?
I think you are either offended by this flash... or by something i have said in one of my reviews. I am sorry if i have offended you... i have apologised GENUINELY if that is the case. but can i review your review? and just say... you dont have to put it so tactlessly. you can upset a lot of people by being so blunt and clumsy.
work on the execution of your reviews. and dont come down like a ton of shit bricks on something they spent time and effort to create.
thank you for your review. i will take the limited helpful information from it, and work on it.

[Pixtropolis City]

Nah

This was so bad. The different parts didn't even go together. The whole thing was basically a copped up jacket made of patches and rags. It was ALL motion tweening, and the graphics were sooo bad. If you want to make a pixel animation, at least do it correctly and not make it an eyesore.

The only thing special about this collab was the pixeltools addon you used, which isn't that special to begin with. Lame.

[-Love at First Sight-]

It's pretty good.

For a music collab, this was pretty good. I liked the animation, but one thing that can be improved is the storyline. It's as if there's a new story every 10 seconds. Overall, I still liked this though.

Zwickel responds:

The storyline is KISS

[Without A Mushroom]

I lol'd.

The hand-drawn animation was kinda sloppy, but I laughed when Mario said "Luigi, its-a me, Mario!" in that serious voice. I also liked how Mario got all pumped up and just jumped on the goomba.

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

;).

[The Library Party]

Wow, pretty cool

I liked it. It would have been more interesting if there was more going on, though. Like special effects in the foreground or something.

BadBoyMcCoy responds:

Thanks, yea i'm thinking of making something similar to this, so more special effects and explosions and shizzle next time maybe....

[Merry Christmas NG ( 3D )]

WOAH

A filter installed by default on a camera that you bought and recorded. Pretty impressive, considering that you invented the camera, the filtering software, the filter, and the recording software eh?

www-kaywire-com responds:

I KNOW EY ?

[~SnowSnowForLucyTrailer~]

Evil Toys? OH NO ANYTHING BUT THAT

I seriously laughed at that idea. How will she survive as a worker making EVIL TOYS? The whole trailer was WAAAY too fast paced. The graphics were good, but you need to leave them on the screen longer to be appreciated. The trailer didn't convey the plot of the story, anyways.

SpikeVallentine responds:

LOOOOOOOL! "Evil Toys" looool! *sarcasm* oooo big deal.
lol! heh <3

Thank you for your honesty.

[Why (American)Anime Sucks]

Horrible.

I hate anime too, but this was just a pile of shit. The voices were horrible, there was no animation beyond a spinny purple thing, and you only parodied Yugioh.

FazzleMan responds:

Its a style of animation. But nobody seems to really understand that.

[Ball Toss]

It was okay.

The graphics were very poor, and there needs to be sound. A song and some sound effects would be nice. And my friend, there is more to animation than shape tweening.

dragonman101 responds:

Um, Kyothine, this is my first ever flash. You could learn from these other guys, it's a little thing called moral support.