Kyothine's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bored artist 3]

ugh

this one was terrible. The beginning graphics are crappy stick figure pictures, which were filter raped to make them look moving. The animation for the hammer was poor, and the you didn't give them mouths, you didn't even define who was talking!

and again, the voice acting was bad, and there was no background. Add some more content next time if you want my five.

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adam2510 responds:

hi dont bother reviewing my stuff

[Bored artist 4]

wasn't that good.

There was no background, and the voice acting was terrible. Hire someone to voice act properly for you, because that one thing detracted a lot from the content.

Also, the graphics weren't that good, mostly bitmap images that you ripped from video games/ photoshops and stick figures.

Maybe you should add some better graphics and make it funny, because I'm not laughing. Add a background and get a better voice actor, and you'll be set.

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adam2510 responds:

its not my fault ur a lame assed critic

[ACML Speed]

good

it was good, and the special effects in the beginning were phenomenal, but later on there were drawings (like the ripplyhaired redhead) that killed the mood.

[Big Ass Badgers]

LMAO!

I love it, its so funny. I like how you edited it without making the heads look all floaty, like most other artists do when editing a movie. 5/5!

[Awesome Grounds]

liked the concept

egoraptor really isn't the best of animators (he's JUST like the super mario world/ smash kingdom guys). He just swears a lot, so it's nice to see that some people know good humor when they see it.

I didn't really like the voices though. They're always pausing while they're talking, it's annoying.

And the animation wasn't really the best. I mean, really, if you're insulting someone's flash series because of the poor animation, you shouldn't respond with animation worst than the ones they crap out.

I still laughed at the "MY A-HOLE" part though.

AshfordPride responds:

I did it in one take. Like a real thespian.

[Super MarioWars (Trailer)]

5.8 mb for a 15second trailer?

geez, there was no background, just ablack screen. And it didn't have much of a plot, even for a trailer. Maybe make it longer?

lyndis313 responds:

I honestly don't know why it took such a big file....

But I hope it doesnt go over 10mb when the full thing comes out.

[Smash Kingdom]

pretty meh

even for a sprite movie, this movie wasn't animated very well. It wasn't funny most of the time. Some scenes like kirby and the 3rd parties had no punchline, just use of the word "fuck" alot.

Some parts were funny though, so you got points for that.

["BLAMMED"]

tch

a tad bit unoriginal. There are many, MANY flashes like this. I expected more from the animation than just circles for hands, and uneased motion tweens. The concept isn't that good, I mean "Portal submission stage X"? Maybe you could find a way to add in that different people give it different scores, not that when a flash is made, it's destined to pass/blam.

Rutger responds:

I didn't use any tweens for my movie! Except the fading in/out and the obituaries page screenshot.

[After Judgement]

meh

I liked the plot, and the bot art, but the swf animation wasn't really good. And the concept didn't make it look like the actual after judgement, but great job on the plot!

[ilovecandy2]

it was just a short loop

I'll admit, it amused me for about 10 seconds, but it's such a short loop. Try making something longer, and you could maybe get a score above 3.