Kyothine's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[[R3R] - "V"s and "B"s]

VVVVVVVVVV

It was okay, but the apples and orange switcharound thing was soooo badly done.
Also, add a background and use tweens.
The actual plot wasn't that good either, but you made me chuckle a bit.
5/5

[A very DOCKY Halloween]

Its okay...

The overall plot of your movie is good, but the animation wasn't as much. It lags a lot, maybe you can try to fix that? Also, the punching sound sucks, and the rain drop effect was...unnatural.

The jokes were good though, so Ill give you a 4/5 for that

IZSBHR responds:

4 out of 5 still raises the score XD

Thanks :)

[LR: Phoenix Wrong]

It was great!

I loved how you used the sprites to make funny flash. You kinda overused some songs, though.

Little-Rena responds:

Overuse of songs in the way forward! Lol, thanks for the comments.

[[R3R] The Convict]

lawl

0 n0ez, teh cookies are teh missing! Anyways, it was a good flash. Maybe lengthen it up a bit.

ShrimpLock responds:

Yeah I was thinking about it, but then it wouldn't be an 'animated short' as I planned.

Can there be animated longs?

[[R3R] How to kill a Ninja]

It was okay...

Needs improvement. This flash went a little too fast. Maybe slow the frame rate down a bit? It also wasn't clear what ClockNinja did, and the movements were choppy, along with the sound.

[[R3R] The Jackass Collab]

Its funneh XD

It was really funny, especially ClockCommunist's. In all truthfulness (Sp?), i think I could've done better. I should have added more humor. Anyways, good flash!

ShrimpLock responds:

Yeah ClockCommunist's was really well done.

Hooray good flash!

[Clay Funny]

Hmm...

This movie is okay. There has to be sound for it to be understandable, the picture quality is off, and there isn't much of a plot. Add those three things to what you already have and you have a great flash. Keep up the okay work.

[Inu-Yasha in a Nutshell]

Apparently lots of thieves steal inuyasha flash

Because I have seen all these flashes before. Either someone stole these or you did. either way, the flashes were good.

GabuGurl responds:

Well, apparently they do!!! I definitely made this, check the dates if you wish. I'm original. Please, if you see any copies of this on newgrounds, could you do me a favor and report them? Thank you.

[[R3R] ClockNinja's Collab]

Yes

That was awesome. It could have been a little longer though. it was Soooo short. The 2.5 score surprised me. Anyways, there is a LOT to improve, and I wouldn't have voted 5 if it wasn't R3R. Maybe more plot and more submissions. The part with the "No Loops" wasn't necessary. All in all, it is ok.

ShrimpLock responds:

Thanks for the review. If we decide to make a sequel, then we'll keep it in mind to make it longer and to take out the unnecessary stuff.

[[KK] Stick Advance]

Where'd the fifth version go?

Yeah, anyways, this was an okay flash at best. Even though I was asked to fiven it, I would have voted 5 all the same. Maybe you could make the flash longer

Magyar responds:

ahhh..... your one of the smart ones who spotted the missing 5 :)